Fri, January 4, 2019 in Issue 5: Alpin Aneat

Issue 5: Alpin Aneat - Page 9

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shastab24 Fri, January 4th, 2019 edit delete
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Lineart by Fauzan Zein, colors by me.

This page suffered from my poor communication with my artist. Panel 3 was supposed to be Alpin stabbing his father, his father's hand on his shoulder in the previous panel being revealed to be the man clutching him in reaction, not comforting. And Alpin is supposed to be the one giving the speech to the congregation when the people are given the poisoned drinks, showing this was his doing, as opposed to what he's saying. I think I've started to communicate better with my artists as time has gone on, however.